Haiku


In beauty and love
Trial and error curse us all, yet
It works out somehow.

My first attempt at a haiku. Be gentle.
E x

Advertisements

2 comments

  1. Craigo · May 5, 2012

    Is “Trial” monosyllabic? I counted it as two.

    Like

  2. Rik Davnall (@eatthepen) · June 1, 2012

    This is excellent
    But haiku are really hard.
    Keep up the good work

    Like

Respond

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s